well broseph, i dont have the time to read that much at the moment but everything else you've posted on this thread is top-notch, so im sure its great. i'll definitly check it out when i log back on tonight.
ok scratch that, i read a paragraph and got sucked in. you've got talent man, honestly. that was very chilling and eerie. well done, when a reader can feel the emotion you know you've doen well.